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I hate spiders. They are invading my house. My previous fear has turned into anger, and then my said hatred. And I'm sure they hate me back for killing as many of their kin as I have.

ROMANS they are based on Romans but I didn't do much research that will come in the future promise >.>

PS: Maximilian is a favorite name of mine :meow: I am planning on drawing him- or at least his clothes yay
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
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This is a very intriguing concept. The Spider takes from a single person to help many, but doesn’t even need to kill that person to do so. It reminds me of how some ancient people viewed the spider as a giver of knowledge. I also like how the significance of the Spider is reflected in the culture’s artwork, just as you imagine most cultures would do with a deity.

He had never felt particularly drawn to the figure of the Spider, though he knew that it was the reason there was even able to be life in the desert that they lived in.
The wording in this sentence is a bit awkward. Maybe
He had never felt particularly drawn to the figure of the Spider, though he knew that it was the reason life was even possible in the desert that they lived in.

He was about to try and walk out anyway when a hands grabbed both his arms and started pulling him forward.
He was about to try and walk out anyway when a hand grabbed both his arms and started pulling him forward.

They got closer and closer to the edge of the pit until finally someone pushed him in with a well place shove.
Was someone or some force pulling him in, or did someone sneak up behind him to push him in, or both?

He was in an uncomfortably position on his side with his back to the wall of the pit
He was in an uncomfortable position on his side with his back to the wall of the pit